Editors at the ready!

 

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This week we have been learning about editing and how to be good editors. In Year 2 we need to suggest changes to work and correctly errors. We used the book, ‘The Very Little Red Riding Hood’ and edited it! We changed the incorrect speech because Very Little Red Riding Hood doesn’t speak properly and we added some time connectives to make it more exciting. Some of us even added exciting adjectives to engage the reader even more. Take a look at some of the work we’ve done!

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